Fix typos, formatting, and vague language where possible.
Signed-off-by: Loui Chang <louipc.ist@gmail.com> [Fixed menu.lst: LiveCD -> Live CD -aaron] Signed-off-by: Aaron Griffin <aaronmgriffin@gmail.com>
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README
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@ -5,7 +5,7 @@ Archiso For Dummies Like Me and You
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- What the hell is Archiso?
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Archiso is a small set of bash scripts that is capable of building fully
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functional ArchLinux-based liveCDs. It is a very generic tool, so it
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functional Arch Linux based live CDs. It is a very generic tool, so it
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could potentially be used to generate anything from rescue systems,
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to install disks, to special interest live CD systems, and who knows what
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else. Simply put, if it involves Arch on a shiny coaster, it can do it.
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@ -46,8 +46,8 @@ system anyway.
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You'll also want to create a list of packages you want installed on your
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live CD system. A file full of package names, one-per-line, is the format
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for this. Typically you'll want BASE and a kernel as a bare minimum, but
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you're free to install whatever else you want (this is *great* for
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special interest liveCDs, just specify packages you want and gogogo).
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you're free to install whatever else you want. This is *great* for
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special interest live CDs, just specify packages you want and gogogo.
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The last item of importance is what are called addons. Basically this
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means any other crap you might want to include on your live CD, including
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@ -146,7 +146,7 @@ run_hook ()
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udevpid=$(/bin/minips -C udevd -o pid=)
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[ "x${udevpid}" != "x" ] && /bin/kill -9 $udevpid 2>&1 >/dev/null
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#Yep, we're bailing out here. We don't need kinit.
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msg ":: Passing control to Archlinux Initscripts...Please Wait"
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msg ":: Passing control to Arch Linux Initscripts...Please Wait"
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/bin/umount /sys
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/bin/umount /proc
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exec /bin/run-init -c /dev/console /real_root /sbin/init ${CMDLINE}
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@ -249,7 +249,7 @@ command_iso () {
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mkisofs ${qflag} -r -l $bootflags -uid 0 -gid 0 \
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-input-charset utf-8 -p "prepared by mkarchiso" \
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-no-emul-boot -boot-load-size 4 -boot-info-table \
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-publisher "ArchLinux <archlinux.org>" \
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-publisher "Arch Linux <http://www.archlinux.org>" \
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-A "Arch Linux Live/Rescue CD" \
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-o "${imgname}" "${work_dir}/iso/"
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}
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@ -2,15 +2,15 @@ HOW-TO: Contribute to this help
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-------------------------------
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This help is rather simplistic.
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In order to provide help files or translations you simply need to make a text
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file. Formatting is important (due to grub limitations). The files MUST be 80
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characters wide, and 23 lines long. Any more, and your formatting will be
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corrupted when viewing the help. Please note that if your help is short, it is
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worthwhile to pad with empty lines, up to 23 lines.
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Please post any and all help files you wish to contribute, to the ArchLinux bug
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tracker at http://bugs.archlinux.org
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In order to provide help files or translations you simply need to make a
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text file. Formatting is important (due to grub limitations). The
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files MUST be less than 80 characters wide, and 23 lines long.
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Any more, and your formatting will be corrupted when viewing the help.
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Please note that if your help is short, it is worthwhile to pad with
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empty lines, up to 23 lines.
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Please post any and all help files you wish to contribute, to the
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Arch Linux bug tracker at http://bugs.archlinux.org
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Installation and Live-CDs
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----------------------------
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All CDs and USB-Images are installation mediums and Live-CDs,
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All CDs and USB images are installation mediums and Live CDs
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which can be used as maintenance and rescue systems.
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FTP-ISOs/Images:
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----------------
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These are the preferred install mediums for ArchLinux. You get always
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the actual package versions using these mediums.
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These are the preferred install mediums for Arch Linux.
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You can always get up to date packages using these mediums.
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archlinux-200X.yy-ftp-i686.iso i686/32bit CD-ISO
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archlinux-200X.yy-ftp-i686.img i686/32bit USB-Image
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Core-ISOs/Images:
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-----------------
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These are for offline installations when no Internet access available
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These are for offline installations when no Internet access is available
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to install the base system.
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archlinux-200X.yy-core-i686.iso i686/32bit CD-ISO
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How to use these installation images:
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-------------------------------------
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Please ensure the sha1sum matches that in the SHA1SUMS file in this directory
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Please ensure the sha1sum for your downloaded file matches the checksum
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in the the SHA1SUMS file in this directory.
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See section in the "Arch Linux Install Guide":
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http://wiki.archlinux.org/index.php/Official_Arch_Linux_Install_Guide#Pre-Installation
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Happy installing!
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Happy ARCHing!
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- Arch Linux Release Engineering team
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# I'm a make retard, there are probably prettier ways of doing this...
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WORKING_DIR=$(PWD)/.work
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ISO_NAME=$(PWD)/Archlinux-XFCE4-Live.iso
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ISO_NAME=$(PWD)/archlinux-xfce4-live.iso
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all: iso
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